green
forests of the page
tree lines drop thumbed leaves
spaces, clear thought skies
blue
seas wash a-sure ideas
drift towards undiscovered isles
words cast in a bottle
red
warmth of sentiments
writ orange in setting sun
fall betwixt brown eyes
white
spaced eyes roll
move to one side or another
peripheral ideas
September 20, 2008 at 10:58 pm
Nice rhythm, though seemingly separate ideas, you’ve made them flow together.
September 21, 2008 at 1:03 am
Well, I was doing haikus on colours seperately until I noticed that they also seemed to fit together (strangely!)
As in “Clear thought skies” = blue
“Words cast in a bottle” = red/read
“Fall betwixt brown eyes” = white of eyes
Pure fluke, but I suppose as I was thinking of colours as the theme in each case, I guess the odds of it linking were greater.
It was interesting to do.