It’s a long way back my love,
you thought the road was done,
yellow lines turn to white,
but the deal is it’s further
than the last fretful journey;
long strip lights left behind
the motorway blaze.

Sink in black leather, then I’m a man
who drives away fractured lines.
The roar of the engine escapes,
presses my thumb against the wheel.

“Leave the foot off the brakes”
she always tells me,

and I lean and mouth I love her,
while those mile signs lessen.

4 Responses to “Hard to keep the foot off the brakes”

  1. Cassia Says:

    I wrote this recently for a challenge on the subject “Lost Love/Broken Hearts” … Just so you know I still write, though only occasionally (it sounds quite dark, I´m afraid, but it just came out that way, in an intense mood):

    Phantom pain

    Don´t love me lightly, love me deep,
    or better never say hello at all
    before you make me weep,
    don´t love me on a whim,
    please love me deep.

    Don´t let me walk the garden of your soul
    while you don´t even seek the gate to mine.
    Please love me as a whole,
    don´t waste my time.

    Because I´ll give my all,
    my heart and spirit,
    body, will and mind to you,
    the one I love.
    Once you´ve encouraged me
    to open up, I beg you,
    please be true and kind.

    If you can´t love me, do not offer sunshine
    just to leave me in an endless rain.
    Too many men have walked away
    and left me screaming inside,
    day and night, sometimes for years,
    from phantom pain.

  2. Matt Says:

    Good poem, Soub.

  3. Cassia Says:

    Another poem I recently wrote for a picture challenge I set up myself – in honour to you, it was a Jack Vettriano painting, you introduced me to his art, this one:

    http://www.jackvettriano.eu/images/jack_vettriano_mad_dogs.jpg

    Here´s the poem, nothing special again, but I´m really glad when I can write something:

    How could he choose her over me?
    That he adores her every move
    is all too plain for everyone to see.

    The thing she has that I don´t have,
    what could it be?
    It isn´t charm. It´s sure not wits.
    A little bit more femininity?

    The sky, the beach, my yellow envy,
    and the totally indifferent sea —
    She smiles,
    he whispers sweet endearments,

    I hold my own umbrella over me.

    Love, have a nice weekend,

    Cassia

  4. Matt Says:

    That’s quite a sad take on the picture, another good
    poem though.


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