Death can be Ruff

There’s a dog,
a dead dog.

“Oh, dead doggy
dog dog,
dead doggy dog,
do you, do you
remember me?”

says the flea.

Nope, I’m dead,
and your timing is lousy,
get off.

I’m thinking, Walter Matthau as the voice of the dog.


4 thoughts on “Death can be Ruff

  1. Did you purposefully use the word ‘lousy’?
    If not: I like how you’ve unconsciously made a play on words.
    If you did know what you were doing: Bravo.
    😀 This is excellent.

  2. Matt says:

    Yes, ‘lousy’ is meant for the double meaning, I enjoy playing with words. Thanks for taking a look at this rough piece 🙂

  3. nectarfizz says:

    How did I not meet you before this? I clearly am not anywhere near as funny sas you are…but I can learn (poises a pen over paper)

  4. Matt says:

    Is anybody really any funnier than anyone else? I’m not entirely sure. We’re all funny in our different ways, and equally unfunny at times too.

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