5am

5am

Another day in this conscious tenderness,
all the leaves are swept up, so tidy.

The stems under the broom of us,
capable piles of reds and orange, the colours
of our love that still seems fresh green too.

In the air, the reverberation
of an event we spoke of last night, touching,
from the window all the day is dawning.

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5 thoughts on “5am

  1. jnspire says:

    This is beautiful, visually stunning while simplistic.

  2. Matt says:

    Thank you. I guess sometimes you don’t have to say much to say a lot, which
    is what I was hoping to for here.

  3. Bekki says:

    Sooo beautiful. When did you write this one?

  4. Matt says:

    Oh, about 4.50am. (joke)

  5. Bekki says:

    LOL. I meant what date, but you knew that! Goose.

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